Life goes on, oblivious of our moods
Like the feeling of love, that envelops us unsought
For somebo...
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Life goes on, oblivious of our moods
Like the feeling of love, that envelops us unsought
For somebody or something to which we are besot
Love is a feeling that cannot be second guessed
But accepted, as a fact, both heartfelt and blessed
Love is unique, its one of a kind
Those who accept it say it is all in the mind
Those who do not, say love is an obsession
The urge to grab and gain posession
Whatever it is, it is real and heartfelt
It comes when it comes ,unbidden and unbeckoned
It's all embracing, encompassing, totally unreckoned
Love is both the giving and the taking
Often, the giver and taker, have their roles reversed
Some times a mere glance can satiate its thirst
But at others, it shows up in action, over the passing of time
As with mother's love over a life's long path, traversed
Or supporting a spouse in his journey into darkness
Where the mind ceases while lover's memories remain sublime
Love is a gift that God or Fate gives you
Love is the condition that both crushes and exults you
Love is the the thing we share, by being human
Allowing us to think of the other before self
And to act for others despite pain and and life's pelf
Love is self denying, while possesive love is oxymoronic
Love is the alpha and the omega of passion, that is mythic
Love thinks of the other and seeks to protect
Love is both for the giving and the taking
Love looks to the other and never forgets
Love has no demands, no expectations, no regrets
Love is sitting up for a sick child all the night through
Love is feeding the other the last crumb and starving
Love is protecting even if it means a fight
Love is spending a lifetime in loyalty all day and all night
Love is all that is good and life affirming
Love might be in the mind but is indeed out of sight !
Love is something that makes life worth living
Love is tenderness and is life uplifting
Love seeks not for self, but seeks for the other
Love is for loving, love is for sharing
Love is the essence of the human condition
It makes us not what we are but what we should be
In the final analysis it makes us reach for the stars
Love makes us whole and salves all of life's scars.
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Thank you Mrs M: It is good for someone like you to go thru' my list.
GG
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Dear Girdharji,
This is so heartfelt :)) This has the optimism without which we all would give up and quit !!
Am definitely going to come over again to your poetry blogs !! There's so much to learn in Sulekha !!
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Tanushri :Thank You for your presence and your recommendation
Yes, Love is all that and more
Girdhar
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Hi Girdhar,
Lovely poem...especially the lines -
Love is self denying, while possesive love is oxymoronic
Love is the alpha and the omega of passion, that is mythic
Love thinks of the other and seeks to protect
Love is both for the giving and the taking
Love looks to the other and never forgets
Love has no demands, no expectations, no regrets...
Wonderful!!!
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VSG;Thank you for your visit and Reco. I would also very much appreciate a visit to :
Rgds, Girdhar
girdhargopal.sulekha.com/blog/post/2008/06/the-fifth-sentence-a-poetic-answer-to-bilingual-s.htm
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Hi Girdhar,
A brave and successful attempt at depicting in a poem the universality of love in all its forms and colours.
I liked particularly:
Love is the condition that both crushes and exults you
Love is the alpha and the omega of passion, that is mythic
regds
vs gopal
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Avinash: Welcome back ! I am now going through a kind of hiatus the calm before the storm or could be the calm before the calm ! Love is an emotion that one feels but cannot describe, except through actions which I have tried to do. When it is described, it is often on the form of passion, which love is not. As love has passion, great deal of passion, but passion is not the sine qua non of love, self sacrifice is.
Thank you for your recommendatuin.
Rgds, Girdhar
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Love is indeed all that. Although we biochemists call it a play on chemicals in the brain, I believe it is just much more than that. It has to be because - if it were a matter of chemicals only - any good form of flesh would have aroused the same feelings in us. But I went firing all guns for a rather thin human specimen when far fuller candidates were there for the taking. What I found in the thin one and continue to find when the thinness has been fleshed out perfectly today I know - I found peace and excitement together, I found the thrill of newness and coziness of the old all at once, I found joy of beauty and comfort of the routine in that one single person. I found all contrasts assembled in that one person who is today my friend and wife. I think love is undefined and should best be left that way.
Regards
Avinash
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Raju: Poetry gives one the ability to give your own twist to reality which brings it into focus.
Thank you,
Girdhar
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I thought you are a very good writer - now you are showing true colors of love to the poetic version as well !!! A very good one.
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